On the Surface
Greed probably undid her in the end.
She was said to have taken a bait of uncooked tiger nuts,
which swelled inside her until she floated upwards.
Telltale empty paper bags were found on the bank of the river.
Or she may have been pregnant,
with 300,000 eggs causing complications, or stressed
after so much catching and releasing,
those constant brushes with extinction.
On the line between life and death, at Kingfisher Lake,
she breathed the fatal air and did not sink again.
And there she lay,
like Wisdom drawn up from the deep:
as golden, and as quiet.
This poem was posted on the website Verbatim Poetry, where you can find "poetry from the ordinary." "On the Surface" is actually prose from an Economist article describing the death of a famous British fish! The website features poems from the Shreddies Wikipedia page, fitting instructions for a bicycle wheel, and quotes by GOP candidate Rick Santorum, among many other unusual sources. I think that the poetry found on this website translates very well to the classroom. By having students create poems by using unexpected sources of inspiration, they would learn to judge for themselves the "sound" of poetry, and practice using line breaks for effect. The fact that the words are coming from a source outside themselves takes off a lot of that pressure that students feel towards writing poetry, while allowing them to be creative with free verse. It would be very fun to read what students come up with for an assignment like this!
In their "about" page, Verbatim states that "language is everywhere that we are. Poetry is language framed." If we teach students that the everyday world contains little poetic gems, I think we would send a very positive and long-lasting message.
Because they take submissions, Verbatim has some great guidelines on their site for how to create a successful verbatim poem. While they joke that all it really takes is to arrange the text from a non-poetic source into lines, they also go on to describe what is meant by a non-poetic source, and what kinds of changes to the text are acceptable or unacceptable. Their guidelines would be fantastic to give out to students, since they are easy to understand and explicit. You could even add an element of authenticity to the assignment by having students actually submit their poems to the website.
And now for a well-known poem from that famous American
The Unknown
- As we know,
- There are known knowns.
- There are things we know we know.
- We also know
- There are known unknowns.
- That is to say
- We know there are some things
- We do not know.
- But there are also unknown unknowns,
- The ones we don't know
- We don't know.
- from Pieces of Intelligence: The Existential Poetry of Donald H. Rumsfeld (2003) by Hart Seely
Hi Lisa,
ReplyDeleteI LOVE this idea of using Verbatim poetry! I definitely agree that we can find poetic gems in everything; I'm a firm believer that beauty is everywhere, we just have to find it! Poetry is a great way to express not only emotions, feelings or thoughts, but also just every nuances that we all experience. I think this would be an excellent idea to use in an English classroom. It makes poetry approachable, relatable to students and most of all, fun! Thanks for sharing :)
Nga.
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ReplyDeleteLisa,
ReplyDeleteI have always been fascinated by the idea of "ready-mades" whether it is in in the realm of poetry or visual arts, as is demonstrated by artists such as Marcel Duchamp and Emmanuel Radnitsky. By the sounds of it, Verbatim poetry is a fan of art, writing and beauty found in unsual places. If I were to take this philosophy into my classroom I would emphasize that poetry can be unsual, spontaneous, or even unintentional.(How liberating!)In doing so I think this would relieve the pressure attached to understanding poetry and even writing your own.
If I were planning a poetry unit, I would definitely want my students to explore this blog. I also think I might have students bring in something they considered to be found artwork, and then challenge them to write a poem based on it.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Readymades_of_Marcel_Duchamp